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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 22:48, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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- ... that despite being only 40 feet (12 m) tall, Roar-o-Saurus was described as one of the "most insane" new roller coasters of 2014 by CNN? Source: https://www.cnn.com/travel/article/best-usa-new-roller-coasters/index.html
5x expanded by ReedyTurnip (talk). Self-nominated at 03:56, 9 January 2024 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Roar-o-Saurus; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]
Overall: 
While the hook is in decent shape, I think it would be stronger if it were in active voice. I propose this as an alternative:
- ALT1: ... that despite being only 40 feet (12 m) tall, CNN described Roar-o-Saurus as one of the "most insane" new roller coasters of 2014? Source: https://www.cnn.com/travel/article/best-usa-new-roller-coasters/index.html
CJ-Moki (talk) 04:39, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]- Thank you for the review, I agree that the alternate hook is better. ReedyTurnip (talk) 13:18, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I believe ALT1 is good to go. CJ-Moki (talk) 18:02, 9 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Roar-o-Saurus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: CosXZ (talk · contribs) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I am still reviewing CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ReedyTurnip: I got some Stuff I need you to do under 2C CosXZ (talk) 23:59, 9 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Hello, I have responded to both issues. Thank you for your work on the review, I am not exactly sure what is going no with this article, since it is still proposed for merge. I am still somewhat new to editing, so I'm not sure exactly how to continue on with the proposed merge.ReedyTurnip (talk) 13:46, 10 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- More stuff under 2C and Other CommentsCosXZ (talk) 19:11, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @ReedyTurnip: CosXZ (talk) 15:33, 12 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- I have addressed all the comments. I am very sorry that it has been taking me a few days to respond, I have been busy.ReedyTurnip (talk) 13:20, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
1A
All good CosXZ (talk) 19:24, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
1B
lead/lede
Y CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
layout
Y CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
word choice
Y CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2A
Looks great CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2B
Overall looks good CosXZ (talk) 17:16, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
2C
- According to Dave Lipnicky of the American Coaster Enthusiasts, the ride's small scale makes it less intimidating to kids, while still packing a "wild punch".[5] [5] doesn't mention this information [2] does mention this information
- The track length is disputed, RCDB says 1240ft, CNN, Coaster101, inparkmagazine, and Daily Sun says 1242ft, and Press Herald and Globe says 1250ft
- I see that the length to be disputed, I'm not sure exactly what to do, I can maybe replace with "around 1250 feet". I'm not sure what is the best option, please let me know
- Add a note at with a total track length of 1,240 feet (380 m) saying: The data on the track length varies according to the sources used.
- The park announced that the ride would open in May 2014, in time for the park's 60th anniversary. put [2] after the comma and [3] after the period
2D
I used Earwig and it found 6.5% similarity between the article and the CNN source with "Story Land, Glen, New Hampshire" in the Short Description, "at Story Land in Glen, New Hampshire" in lead/lede, and "The most insane new U.S. roller coasters" in Reception but it shouldn't be a copyright violation ,otherwise, Earwig found nothing copied from the other sources CosXZ (talk) 23:31, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
3A
Y CosXZ (talk) 17:16, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
3B
Y CosXZ (talk) 17:16, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
4
No biased information CosXZ (talk) 18:47, 11 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
5
Very stable CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6A
Appropriate Copyright CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
6B
Appropriate Image and Caption CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Other comments
Concerned about the merge tag CosXZ (talk) 16:52, 12 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- What does Kentucky Flyer have to do with Roar-o-Saurus
- It is a similar coaster by the same manufacturer, but this is only really of interest to a small group of enthusiasts, so I removed it.
While the hook is in decent shape, I think it would be stronger if it were in active voice. I propose this as an alternative:
I believe ALT1 is good to go. CJ-Moki (talk) 18:02, 9 January 2024 (UTC)
CosXZ (talk) 22:51, 7 April 2024 (UTC)
I looked at a Featured article that cited Coaster101 and when the article was nominated for featured article, they did a source check and in that article [81] which is a Coaster101 article they said [81] failed verification also looks like someone's opinion.