Talk:Lou Rash

Links

https://www.pro-football-reference.com/players/R/RashLo20.htm

https://www.profootballarchives.com/players/r/rash00200.html

https://www.newspapers.com/image/34120007/?match=1&terms=louis%20rash

https://www.newspapers.com/image/146360001/?match=6&terms=lou%20rash

https://www.newspapers.com/image/146414441/?match=2&terms=lou%20rash

https://www.newspapers.com/image/159612011/?match=1&terms=lou%20rash

https://www.newspapers.com/image/146605668/?match=1&terms=lou%20rash

https://www.newspapers.com/image/623444159/?match=1&terms=lou%20rash

https://www.newspapers.com/image/47552883/?match=1&terms=lou%20rash

BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:45, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Lou Rash/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 00:03, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 15:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:02, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

• Maybe make a note on was also a member of the Pittsburgh Steelers in the NFL and the Saskatchewan Roughriders and Toronto Argonauts in the Canadian Football League (CFL) that although he was on their teams, he never played a game for them?
• Change about 18 pounds to almost 20 pounds to better summarize the source
• at the position, and that he no need for the comma
• You don't need to repeat Canadian Football League since you defined it in the lead
• and was considered to have impressed early at cornerback, although he eventually was released on June 18 --> and although it was noted he impressed at cornerback, he was released on June 18.
• Link to Free safety
• Ref spot check:
  • Link Delta Democrat Times (Ref 3)
  • Red link Beaver Dam Daily Citizen (Ref 17) (it is red linked at The Daily Citizen)
  • Add access-dates to Ref 2, 4, 12
  • References are consistently formatted and match what is being cited.

Nice work! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:33, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• @Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:26, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Nice work. Passed! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:34, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

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• ... that in his first year in the NFL, Lou Rash was told he was released and began flying back home, but was told upon landing that the release was a mistake and he was to return?

• Source: Was it a Rash decision?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Alan Rosen (restaurant owner)
• Comment: QPQ to be done within 24 hours. Open to other ways of wording the hook.

Improved to Good Article status by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 266 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:49, 29 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]