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Talk:The Christmas Invasion

Synopsis

If someone can come up with a source for that synopsis that anon IP keeps inserting, please do. I've scanned the usual fan and news channels and Outpost Gallifrey and have come up with nothing. So unless a source reveals itself, I'm afraid I'll have to keep reverting it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Khaosworks (talk • contribs) 11:29, 22 June 2005 (UTC)[reply]


Answer: On the offical BBC Doctor Who webpage had this to say about the Christmas Invasion: Filming of the Christmas episode kicks off in London and continues in various locations across Wales, predominantly in Cardiff. Christmas becomes a time of terror for Planet Earth, as the whole of mankind falls under the shadow of the alien Sycorax. Rose needs the Doctor's help, but can she trust a man with a new face?

And this:

Elisabeth Sladen resumes her role as the iconic character Sarah Jane Smith; remembered by a whole generation of Doctor Who fans as the assistant to both Jon Pertwee and Tom Baker.

I hope that answers your question! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kitty~enwiki (talk • contribs) 19:09, 26 July 2005 (UTC)[reply]

General season 2 information

There's a lot of notes in this article that refer to season 2 in general, and not to this episode specifically. I think most of that info is now either in List of Doctor Who serials, specific episode articles, character/actor articles, etc. Might it be a good idea to clear these out a bit? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Radagast (talk • contribs) 12:03, 6 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Original Music

It should be pointed out that the last time an original song was written for the series was "The Ballad of the Last Chance Saloon" in The Gunfighters (1966).

Factually incorrect. The last song written specificly for the program was "Here's to the future" in the 1987 Episode "Delta And The Bannermen." and was written by Keff McCulloch. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.130.103.21 (talk) 18:59, 12 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:The Christmas Invasion/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: DoctorWhoFan91 (talk · contribs) 08:32, 17 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: ClaudineChionh (talk · contribs) 06:29, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]


I will start the review after I have rewatched the episode in the next 24–48 hours. ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email) 06:29, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! And have fun rewatching. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 06:40, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This needs quite a lot of copy-editing before it gets to GA standard. What really stands out are many long, run-on sentences that could be broken up into two or three sentences, and awkward phrasing. I think you could benefit from working through Tony1's excellent writing guides and tutorials, especially User:Tony1/How to improve your writing § Achieving flow and User:Tony1/Exercises in textual flow.

Do you think this is something you can work on within seven days? ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email) 10:24, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I can, yeah. I actually started a little CE just now, will do more when I get the time. Sorry, it was early days as an editor, I didn't write the articles that well. Thank you for the review, I can see what all I need to change.DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 10:34, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Done most of them, responded in the images sub=heading, and might expand the reception section, so will copy-edit as the same time as that. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 11:51, 24 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
This is a huge improvement! I think only the reception section still needs editing? And I guess if we can't find a suitable image for the infobox, I don't think that should hold it back. ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email) 05:45, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I have fixed/responded to all issues. Though I have found more reviews for the episode and would like to expand the reception section. I'll ping you when I'm done (probably in a few days). Thank you for the review, it has been great and very helpful. DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 16:58, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
DoctorWhoFan91: I'm happy with what I see, great job! I'll be travelling from Monday to Thursday so I'm not sure what my internet access or availability will be like. I'm happy to pass this now if you like; that doesn't stop you from continuing to improve it. — ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email) 03:08, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sure then, you can pass it now. Thank you for the review! DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 05:52, 26 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Copy-editing

Close paraphrasing?

Resolved

Writing: I wasn't comfortable about the awkward phrasing of Davies wished to have an adversary having an prosthetic face using the actor's eyes and mouth, and always found the idea of Santa, an old man creeping into children's rooms at night, creepy and checked the Pixley source, and it looks like this might be a case of close paraphrasing while also introducing ambiguity. You could summarise the conception of each monster (Sycorax and Santa) separately rather than in one long sentence.  Done

I made a small correction: an a prosthetic face ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email) 05:00, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I haven't checked for close paraphrasing elsewhere yet. Having done a spot check of sources, I'm less concerned about this now. ClaudineChionh (she/her · talk · contribs · email) 05:39, 25 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Referencing

The Pixley 2006 reference belongs in References (maybe a separate Bibliography heading), not in External links.  Done

Source spot check

Four random numbers (as at Special:Permalink/1253276757): 18, 4, 21, 7.

Images

Resolved
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Did you know nomination

Improved to Good Article status by DoctorWhoFan91 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

DoctorWhoFan91 (talk) 06:46, 26 October 2024 (UTC).[reply]